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    Blood Soaked Blade:

    Like a blade through my heart,
    She died,
    Her loving smile is gone,
    She has gone so pale,
    So lifeless,
    Her life was full of pain,
    The sight of death scared her so,
    I tried to protect her,
    I really did,
    All the blood I spilt for her was for nothing,
    My blade is soaked with blood,
    My blood,
    Her blood,
    Our blood,
    Why has my enemy used my own blade against me?
    Why against her?
    What have we done to deserve this?
    I only wish to live in peace,
    I had a future for her,
    But now she is dead,
    Soon I will be too,
    To live with her was my wish,
    I can’t take it anymore,
    Death follow’s me wherever I go.
    My blood soaked blade has our blood on it,
    Soon it will have my enemy’s as well.

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    Re: " Blood Soaked Blade" A tribute to love

    wow, nice poem there viper. It's passionate revenge tradgey poem. It feels like a a former warrior who lost his lover and is taking up his sword again to take revenge.#

    First to post here. lol finally. viper if u watched Samurai X check out my tribute to Kenshin Himura.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: " Blood Soaked Blade" A tribute to love

    I did it was good.
    Just make sure you keep it up.

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    I will. If u like Samurai X u should go read my tribute to Kenshin Himura

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: " Blood Soaked Blade" A tribute to love

    wow!!!!
    that is best 1 I ever seen keep it up

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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    Re: " Blood Soaked Blade" A tribute to love

    I have seen the X tribute blade X.
    It was really good, keep it up.

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    Re: " Blood Soaked Blade" A tribute to love

    Good job. I liked it.

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