"The Blue Dragon"

Darkened_Star · Mar 13, 2007, 10:15 AM

This was written for my little cousin. ^_^

I sit and watch the night,
gazing quietly at the sky.
Watching the stars and moon,
when something caught my eye.

It was large and fierce,
and soared high above my head.
It was then I believed
the story the old man said.

He told us of a great beast,
one that was gentle and kind.
The great beast of the seal,
that no one could seem to find.

Many tried to locate the beast,
yet no one even saw it.
The people didn't believe him,
not even a little bit.

But I saw it with my own eyes,
the beast of the seal.
I believed him now,
The blue dragon is real.

*RayMe* · Mar 13, 2007, 10:32 AM

waw nice poem...a unique poem i can see a little childish thoughts in there

*koga23* · Mar 13, 2007, 10:35 AM

Yes very nice poem star u have done i like the poem very much.

anime_8000 · Mar 13, 2007, 10:36 AM

T-T is so beautiful darkened true fantasy blended together with childish thoughts is truely unique

Darkened_Star · Mar 13, 2007, 10:39 AM

Thanks guys... I'm glad you like it. I'm sure she will too. ^_^

*hellknight* · Mar 13, 2007, 11:15 AM

OO the blue dragon is real? lol, this poem is unique like Rayme said you have a touch with poems. I hope to see more later on.

Mar 13, 2007, 10:15 AM	#1 (permalink)
Darkened_Star Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Earth Posts: 334 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,082	"The Blue Dragon" This was written for my little cousin. ^_^ I sit and watch the night, gazing quietly at the sky. Watching the stars and moon, when something caught my eye. It was large and fierce, and soared high above my head. It was then I believed the story the old man said. He told us of a great beast, one that was gentle and kind. The great beast of the seal, that no one could seem to find. Many tried to locate the beast, yet no one even saw it. The people didn't believe him, not even a little bit. But I saw it with my own eyes, the beast of the seal. I believed him now, The blue dragon is real. __________________
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koga23 ~The Master~ Join Date: May 2005 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 2,155 Thanks: 3 Thanked 11 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 18,101	Re: "The Blue Dragon" Yes very nice poem star u have done i like the poem very much. __________________ ....Player Killer.... † " There Is Nothing To Fear But F.E.A.R It Self "- (F.E.A.R) †
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Darkened_Star Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Earth Posts: 334 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,082	Re: "The Blue Dragon" Thanks guys... I'm glad you like it. I'm sure she will too. ^_^ __________________
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hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,442 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 15,340	Re: "The Blue Dragon" OO the blue dragon is real? lol, this poem is unique like Rayme said you have a touch with poems. I hope to see more later on.
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