I like this poem very much. It talks about life and tells you should never give up and should always move on and what could be a better sugestion.
I really liked this stranza:
because it's just what I'm thinking about all the time- have I made the right move? and where I will end up like this?Would you end on a murky swamp?
Might you be stuck in the middle?
Did you choose the right way?
Can your destination be reached?
A really nice work Ray. ^^