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    body heat

    this is not a poem so dont say it dont rhyme. this is a sample of things i write but i made it as pg as possible.

    your body close to mine as we share deep passionate kisses. you lay me down on your bed and start to carress my fragile body. my body is wanting you more and more as you carress my soft,tender thighs. i begin to rub your flat chest and trail kisses down your neck as you gasp in surprise. temptation is all around you and i as we both know what is about to happen.

    your right hand glides up my shirt while your left is teasing me in every way possible. i close my eyes to enjoy your sweet torture even more. you begin to trail kisses down my neck and onto my blouse as you await to see what is beneath. i begin to feel intense passion as you explore me further. as i begin to kiss you once more.... i.......i....... wake up. and realize it was all a dream.

    that is as pg as i could get.

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    Re: body heat

    hmm that was pretty ok but you could have put more detail in it like who are the people i know your one f them but who is this are other person and why are you doing this? is it for lust or love these kinds of things are important when doing something like this over all its ok but just remember the kids here when you do another but you did good here though
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    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    I Made It Pg!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    If I Wrote The Real Thing It Would Get Closed.

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    Re: body heat

    it more like a story really.........i can definitely feel the words

    anyways, this might make a good start of a love story maybe

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    blade x it is a story. it's not a poem
    but thanks!

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    Re: body heat

    *nose bleed*.......I need to go find a woman........
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
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    Re: body heat

    hahhahahahah. tarus your mad funny.

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    Re: body heat

    Nice emphasis and detail. Overall Good Job!

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