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Reply With Quotesweet short poem there dude. compacting life into a book which is kept away till the dust gathers n is forgotten. This is the first poem i've seen u written. This is quite good. Keep it up
The pages of my life turn,
as the words of my soul call to me.
I Bleed Black with ink,
and cry with dust.
My heart loves with memories,
and my sins die within.
I tell of stories,
cherished and remembered.
I am the vision,
of tomorrow.
Written by Kasai a.k.a. L.N. Freeman
Edit: Again, I ask that I recieve comments that are more than just a "cool" and "keep it up". I would the readers of the Fanfics and Poems forum to be intelligent and literate. If you're going to comment on my poem please give me criticism. I am trying to grow in my talent.
Last edited by Kasai; May 25, 2006 at 12:32 PM.
Seduced by Flesh
sweet short poem there dude. compacting life into a book which is kept away till the dust gathers n is forgotten. This is the first poem i've seen u written. This is quite good. Keep it up
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
Dark and cool. Like the poem. Keep it up.
Again...your style is short, but your words are strong...I think i'm going to take in some of these ideas for my future pieces...I was thinking about doing one on time as well, but nothing comes so easily when writing for me...
o~Piggy-san~o
This poem is about 3 years old. Trust me, let the words flow and you'll create a wonderful poem. Just remember to edit and look over your poems a multitude of times.
Seduced by Flesh
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