Bottled pain

Ichigo_06 · Jun 01, 2007, 05:13 PM

Everyday, it seems that I have more pain bottled up inside.
With this pain, I gan energy,
With this energy I gain the ability to get things done.
Unlike othersmy pain becomes my strive to get positive things done.

With each passing month I havemore and more pain bottled within
This converter.
The more I get the more is done.
One thing I do to keep this in check is control the amount of anger that I put To work.

This is a difficult task and when my restraints fail,
The seal is broken and on goes the music.
Music, why does this calm me down?
Why does it help me gain control?
why does it release anger and let me see thigs different?

Why am I so concentrated on music when I am angry, mad, or just to "full"?
I have these questions but not one of them are answered, Why?
Do I have to figure it out on my own?
Why when you have questions do you never get an answer?

So little time, So much to figure.

*Lasura* · Jun 02, 2007, 02:47 AM

I just love this poem... though it scares me a bit... You're ok? It's no good to botte up pain and anger... I know it very well...
The poem is really good, I enjoyed reading it... Has a lot of emotion in it... It's just great, nothing wrong in it I could find...

A great work Ichigo!!!

*RayMe* · Jun 02, 2007, 04:57 AM

Hmm...using the negative energy and harness it to burn ur spirit... ahh...
i like the meaning...and the title...bottled pain...really an eyecatching title...

the poems is good...but u need to ermm..edit the spellings to make it look better ^^

and theres a lot of questions in there...u must be confused....sheesh

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jun 02, 2007, 08:39 AM

this is so true anger always brings out the best in
people if they use it like this and how you use it
for writingmaking things or anything really , the fact that
you use the pain for good things lets you wi over that myth
that anger can never be overcame with good intent.

it can be if you do it like this i use the method alot
myself very awesome poem

fallenangel25 · Jun 02, 2007, 09:51 AM

I agree with chalice."with great power comes great responcibility" lol...so true.great poem,few spelling errors. cant wait for your next one.

KuwiRules145 · Jun 02, 2007, 12:22 PM

Eeek!!!! A bit scary and very emotional thats what makes it just simply amazing!!! I love it! I hope to see more of your great poems!

Ichigo_06 · Jun 12, 2007, 05:07 PM

Thank you guys I can not say it enough I really appreciate your feedback.

aeonking · Jun 13, 2007, 04:14 AM

well certainly is emotional but i still love it great poem love all the emotion as well

Ichigo_06 · Jun 13, 2007, 06:53 PM

thank you all for your feedbacks. I really do appreciate it all thanks guys.

!Akura13 · Jun 13, 2007, 07:50 PM

oh my gosh, this poem is so deep and touching. I love it Ichigo_06, you did a wonderful job.

Ichigo_06 · Jun 14, 2007, 04:52 PM

Thank you guys I really do appreciate the feedback. I really do.

Jun 01, 2007, 05:13 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,723	Bottled pain Everyday, it seems that I have more pain bottled up inside. With this pain, I gan energy, With this energy I gain the ability to get things done. Unlike othersmy pain becomes my strive to get positive things done. With each passing month I havemore and more pain bottled within This converter. The more I get the more is done. One thing I do to keep this in check is control the amount of anger that I put To work. This is a difficult task and when my restraints fail, The seal is broken and on goes the music. Music, why does this calm me down? Why does it help me gain control? why does it release anger and let me see thigs different? Why am I so concentrated on music when I am angry, mad, or just to "full"? I have these questions but not one of them are answered, Why? Do I have to figure it out on my own? Why when you have questions do you never get an answer? So little time, So much to figure. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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Jun 02, 2007, 02:47 AM	#2 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,866 Thanks: 56 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 49,192	Re: Bottled pain I just love this poem... though it scares me a bit... You're ok? It's no good to botte up pain and anger... I know it very well... The poem is really good, I enjoyed reading it... Has a lot of emotion in it... It's just great, nothing wrong in it I could find... A great work Ichigo!!! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: Bottled pain Hmm...using the negative energy and harness it to burn ur spirit... ahh... i like the meaning...and the title...bottled pain...really an eyecatching title... the poems is good...but u need to ermm..edit the spellings to make it look better ^^ and theres a lot of questions in there...u must be confused....sheesh __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,212	Re: Bottled pain this is so true anger always brings out the best in people if they use it like this and how you use it for writingmaking things or anything really , the fact that you use the pain for good things lets you wi over that myth that anger can never be overcame with good intent. it can be if you do it like this i use the method alot myself very awesome poem __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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fallenangel25 Newbie Join Date: May 2007 Location: Inbetween Heaven & Hell Posts: 85 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	Re: Bottled pain I agree with chalice."with great power comes great responcibility" lol...so true.great poem,few spelling errors. cant wait for your next one. __________________ [/url]
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,723	Re: Bottled pain Thank you guys I can not say it enough I really appreciate your feedback. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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aeonking Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the shadows Posts: 231 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,641	Re: Bottled pain well certainly is emotional but i still love it great poem love all the emotion as well __________________
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,723	Re: Bottled pain thank you all for your feedbacks. I really do appreciate it all thanks guys. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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!Akura13 Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan... Posts: 638 Thanks: 9 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 12,099	Re: Bottled pain oh my gosh, this poem is so deep and touching. I love it Ichigo_06, you did a wonderful job.
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,723	Re: Bottled pain Thank you guys I really do appreciate the feedback. I really do. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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