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    a bow

    im laying
    in my bed
    with my pillow
    on my head

    some would call
    it suicide
    but call it ending
    my eternal ride

    what i do
    talk to none
    what i do
    is have no fun

    so why dont i
    do it now
    to the devil
    i take a bow

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    Re: a bow

    Actually this is REALLY good, I like it even though I ussualy don't like poems witch have a thought of suicide... it's just great!!! The rythming is sooo cool, the theme holds sadness, anger and a lill bit of bad-boy attitude and the last lines are sooo cool!!!!

    A really nice work!!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: a bow

    thank you lasura you always make me feel good when i write a poem and post it on here

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    Re: a bow

    Really? ^^ I do? Well... if I always do so then you must always post good poems... that's good ^^

    I really like them- short and cool

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: a bow

    thank you very much.........i like yours too and ive only been writen for two months

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