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    In the box?

    A short-random-poem done by me, Sheep~ ^^ baa~

    In such a small box,

    Tiny bits of frost drips,

    To the end of my finger tips,

    Such Beauty it holds,

    In such a small place,

    Yet to be able to feel the ice,

    How I wish I could dance under the snow,

    What a shame I don’t know,

    Of such lovely scenary I miss,

    Cold yet Beautiful,

    Colorless yet wonderful.

    So I carry on starring,

    In that box covered with frost,

    blocked by a strong hasty mist,

    too small for me to fit in,

    in that what we call a refridgerator’s freezer. (T_T)

    [baa…. Inspired by: My fridge’s freezer that is really in need of de-frosting RIGHT NOW!]

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    Re: In the box?

    thats a cool poem sheepy sis you hae me wonerign what it was till then ene
    very silly poem i liked it . your so greta when it comes to thing that are
    so silly but very cool poem though
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: In the box?

    Nice one...it's simple but you made it more better by putting it in a center form...nice one.....

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    Re: In the box?

    ^_^ I like It Sheep!

    ~_~ The ending kick A**. hehe.
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    Re: In the box?

    Thank you, I can't believe how jobless I became.
    baa.. (T_T)

    it is silly indeed, Chris-san.

    I really dream to experience the chilling snow.. (u_u)
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    Re: In the box?

    It sounded really serious at first and then you added your fridge freezer ^^ I like!

    Short and simple, I like your rhyming and the idea is funny and cool!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: In the box?

    I thought it was gonna be about being in a casket in the middle of winter.....................But it's about the fridge!! Classic AND original........Good, short, and sweet........I woulda figured you woulda made some strange sheep reference though...........
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    Re: In the box?

    Thank you, kerry. Thank you Taurus-san.
    Yes. It's pathetic and ridiculous indeed.
    My freezer was really covered with thick frost that it was even enough to MOVE my gay emotions. (T____T)

    (u____u) I'm not a poetry kinda sheep. Gomen.

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