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    The Boy

    The boy

    the boy wears a
    fire fighters helmet

    on his head
    a muscle shirt on

    with dirty socks
    and dark shorts

    he sits cross legged
    with bandages

    on his knees
    and his arms

    on his hands
    bruises and scars
    Channy

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    Re: The Boy

    a young boy who dreams to be someone could be a brave fighter to save the innocent lives. Nice one dude, keep it up.

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    Re: The Boy

    its cool how you manage to portray this boy's dreams for his future...it was very intriguing to see great work
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    Re: The Boy

    Nice poem and nice avatar!

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    Re: The Boy

    Humm.
    Interesting format.
    Keep it up.

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    Re: The Boy

    hmmmmm this poem should go with your avatar

    it is great!!!!!

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    I like it. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: The Boy

    Cool. It was nice how you expressed the boy's dream. Interesting, too. ^^

    Keep it up!

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