That poem was real awesome. New poem lover for me! Hope to see more!![]()
Washboard abs and defined guns
Open mouths with drool dripping out
Girls look on with sagging tongues
The perfect man has just walked by
With head held high his eyes look forward
His posture straight as a board
He looks down on everyone who speaks to him
Wow what a jerk he really is
No one seems to know his real behavior
He shows his true colors to his buddies
As soon as a cute girl comes around
A mask is placed a surprise awaits
The ploy is in play
He dares to make his move
Strutting up to have an intrigue
Ooops, he lost his chance to impress
His best friend gets to her first
They start laughing and walk away
Deep in conversation ignoring him
Down the hall they go to class
Anger is boiling just under the surface
His buddy had known that he had liked her
Smoothing over his complexion, putting on a smile
He starts down the hall just behind them
Watching them closely he sees something pass
A note, a letter he wants to know what
He’ll ask his buddy when they hit shop class
Suddenly he sees something that shouldn’t happen
They hugged! Right in the middle of the hallway
He couldn’t believe it
All his hard work trying to get her attention
Just shot down, flushed like a toilet
His anger gets the best of him
Stomping up behind his friend
Grabs him by the shoulder
And roughly turns him around
“What do you think you are doing?!”
He yells at his friend
“You know that I like her!”
His face red with rage
Calmly his friend looks at him and says
“I know that you like her”
Turning slowly her motions the girl forward
“Casey this is my best friend Chase”
“What do you mean best friend?”
Chase angrily spat
“After what you just did”
He stood in contempt waiting for an answer
“Chase what are you talking about?”
His friend inquired in confusion
“You handed her a note of some importance”
Chase hissed menacingly
“First off it was cash and not a note”
His friend plainly stated
“Secondly Casey is not my friend…”
As a smile crept across his face
“Than what is she?”
Chase asked in slight confusion
“She’s my sister and the cash was lunch money”
His friend said and starting laughing
Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily!
That poem was real awesome. New poem lover for me! Hope to see more!![]()
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
woah... what a jerk that is xD nice poem
I am hoping to see more...
@.@ woah.. im not like that @.@
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Aww, I was hoping death. Oh well, I really like the flow of this poem, good job ^_^
Whoa, that was good I was like wanting to know what happens next. What an embarrasing ending though. Good job!
thank you i like to hear comments so i can improve and write more that will get as much positive cristism as this. thank you all
Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily!
your poem's great! the ending was totally hilarious...I'll be waiting for your next poem...>.<...
"Never tell a man that you love him until he has declared his undying love for you."
ahaha, a typical story lol XD I guessed the ending was thatAnyways, the poem story was really enjoying =p Tho quite predictable, not sure whether you took it from a real life experience or anything. The flow of the poem was not bad, nice job
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