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    Otaku Nodes Champion, Flames of Fury Champion shadowrulz may be famous one day shadowrulz may be famous one day shadowrulz's Avatar
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    Br-o---ken

    No matter how many times
    I say I wish you the best
    Whenever I see you two
    Together it breaks my soul

    Just this last time
    I feel like I need hope
    I'm losing myself too
    Even after all that

    You said you still loved me
    Why was that all a lie
    You go with him so easily
    How many times I hate

    I feel like I'm dieing
    From my throat that's bleeding
    Bleeding from that picture
    You so proudly showed me

    He was my friend
    And you were my perfection
    Why did you run with him
    The one who doesn't know love

    He's had so many
    His life is full of falsehood
    He lies his way to hearts
    He'll end up crushing yours

    I still love you
    To the bottom of my heart
    And now I have a steak through it
    The one you threw

    Please come back to me
    I feel like I can't live without you
    Please come back
    My Dear Love

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Br-o---ken

    Huh?... o.0,... could have done better myself but not bad..
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    Re: Br-o---ken

    Gee thanks. . . I really just had my heart broken though. . . In exactly that way. . .

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Br-o---ken

    It sounds like it. I actually know how you feel.. It's a great poem Shadow, don't let the bad comments destroy you. ^^ It was actually a pretty good poem and i liked it. I can't wait to see more from you..
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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