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I feel like going
I feel like staing
all I know is I can't leave.
if I left I would be worse.
All I know is I cant go.
If I go my frinds will miss.
but If I stay I dont know.
All I know is I will miss.
When I'm down they lift me up,
when I am up they keep me alive.
when I am down they keep me going.
If I left I will not know what to do.
I will stay although I wanna go.
I dont want to be alone
darkness brings only doubt.
although I like darkness I dont want to go.
hey,
I like this poem
it's dark
I LOVE IT!!
ok good job
hope to see more like this one.
thanks flaming gate although to tell you the truth it is a true poem and is how I feel right now.
*holds you close* it will be ok. I prmise.
I will keep you going.
But yes it was a very good poem even though it is dark.
I want to read something happy from you.
But yes I was very good lot of emotion it realy touched me. I love it.
thank you PR. I appreciate your feedback. and I will try to post something more posative next time.
hey Ichigo_06,
thi si why I love this poem
some of my poems are true and some are props
like the one with me milking the cow
that was the twist in the poem,
so...ya
lol
ahwwww and that was awsome and it was good i cant wate to reed moreQuote:
Originally Posted by Ichigo_06
thank you naruto11 I appreciate any feed back I can get from you guys.