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    breaking down

    I feel like going
    I feel like staing
    all I know is I can't leave.
    if I left I would be worse.

    All I know is I cant go.
    If I go my frinds will miss.
    but If I stay I dont know.
    All I know is I will miss.

    When I'm down they lift me up,
    when I am up they keep me alive.
    when I am down they keep me going.
    If I left I will not know what to do.

    I will stay although I wanna go.
    I dont want to be alone
    darkness brings only doubt.
    although I like darkness I dont want to go.
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    Re: breaking down

    hey,
    I like this poem
    it's dark
    I LOVE IT!!
    ok good job
    hope to see more like this one.

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    thanks flaming gate although to tell you the truth it is a true poem and is how I feel right now.
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    Re: breaking down

    *holds you close* it will be ok. I prmise.

    I will keep you going.

    But yes it was a very good poem even though it is dark.

    I want to read something happy from you.

    But yes I was very good lot of emotion it realy touched me. I love it.

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    thank you PR. I appreciate your feedback. and I will try to post something more posative next time.
    Last edited by Ichigo_06; Nov 06, 2007 at 12:52 PM.
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    Re: breaking down

    hey Ichigo_06,
    thi si why I love this poem
    some of my poems are true and some are props
    like the one with me milking the cow
    that was the twist in the poem,
    so...ya
    lol

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    Re: breaking down

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    I feel like going
    I feel like staing
    all I know is I can't leave.
    if I left I would be worse.

    All I know is I cant go.
    If I go my frinds will miss.
    but If I stay I dont know.
    All I know is I will miss.

    When I'm down they lift me up,
    when I am up they keep me alive.
    when I am down they keep me going.
    If I left I will not know what to do.

    I will stay although I wanna go.
    I dont want to be alone
    darkness brings only doubt.
    although I like darkness I dont want to go.
    ahwwww and that was awsome and it was good i cant wate to reed more

    you will always find that certain someone to make you feel special and important and good about yourself. all you need to do is believe.
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    Re: breaking down

    thank you naruto11 I appreciate any feed back I can get from you guys.
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