thanks ray me. I aprreciate your feedback. and I will work on that.
confusing a bit..hmmm not bad actually..need some work on grammar and spelling...
plus too many repeating words.. :/ try and use wider vocabulary to make it more interesting.. thats my suggestion..but it's ur choice... ^^ u can make it repeat like a song if u like to.. ^^
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thanks ray me. I aprreciate your feedback. and I will work on that.
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I think this is better than the friendship one! the words seem tho flow a lot better and it a lot deeper. I liked this one alot! so, keep up the good work!
thanks man all feed back is appreciated. I am glad you like it. I will post more soon I hope.
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
very strong and alot of feeling here.
not knowing where to go or were to stay can hard .
yes your friend will alway bring you up no mater what u r
going through.
hope to see more soon okay
Thank you Chrystalanna I am glad you liked it your feedback is greatly appreciated
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
"Darkness brings only doubt." Very nice!
I like this one alot. Everybody's had those "should I stay or should i go now" phases, I'm sure. It sucks not knowing what the next move is gonna be. Good work on this one! ^_^
Thanks again sprout glad you liked it and yes darkness does bring only doubt in my oppinion. lol anyways post more soon!friends!
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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