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Reply With QuoteOuch! that must off hurt!!!!!!!!!
Nice poem I really enjoy it. You were really mad when you wrote it huh.
Please go away and just leave me alone,
I beg of you, cast away your cold shadows off me
Just leave me to be
It’s you who always makes me believe in things
Which I don’t consider nor trust in
I don’t know why I instigate
To say the things I don’t mean
You make me get tangled in the threads
Threads of confusion, lust, agony, jealousy
Of every negative feelings that I conceive
You’re the one responsible for EVERYTHING
Get off my mind and life forever
Go and stick and rob someone else’s soul
I don’t want to live off my memories
I want to live…
Ignore me all you want,
Curse me with whatever comes into your pea brain
The familiar anticipation of warmth and love will not degrade
I don’t want to be the sensitive boy
Who always bends and flutters like a feather
Even by the lightest of breezes
I won’t be a scavenger who feeds off rotten things
I won’t be an idiot who falls in line with the scum
I don’t want to be used and thrown away like garbage
I am who I am, what I want to be
There is nothing that is going to change the way I feel
There will be no turning back on my past
And there certainly will not be any negativity residing underneath
Ouch! that must off hurt!!!!!!!!!
Nice poem I really enjoy it. You were really mad when you wrote it huh.
Nothing less from Pyro ^_^ Great Sig ^_^ THANK YOU!!!!"show me.... THE BEAST!!!" The Beauty and the Beast movie
No not really, I just wrote it to show what people go through., and how it feels.
A truly wonderful poem, I like it a lot!!!
It was really interesting to read it, there really are a lot of feelings and anger in it, I love the way you've expressed everything you feel to this person, couldn't leave anyone cold hearted and not ashamed of what they've done, I too feel sorry for what I've done to my boyfriend when reading this...
This is a really good work, I admire it, I really do...
rave thats an awsome poem but it does show the feelings of someone tryin to run your life.
i loved the last few lines the most there really meaning ful and easy to relate to the whole poem ^__^ 10/10
A very nice poem.
And it does show how someone can ruin your life...
And it does have a lot of anger...in it...
I give it a 10 out of 10. ^___^
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ouch!!! talk about makin' someone think that you are talking about them.... god... what a mean... but sad little poem... I like it^^
I'm trying my best to take this poem seriously. But all I hear is, "Waahhhhh!!".
I mean honestly. No one is "responsible" for EVERYTHING that upsets you. Suck it up and get over it.
Oh. Nice poem, by the way.
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