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    Breakout

    Please go away and just leave me alone,
    I beg of you, cast away your cold shadows off me
    Just leave me to be

    It’s you who always makes me believe in things
    Which I don’t consider nor trust in
    I don’t know why I instigate
    To say the things I don’t mean

    You make me get tangled in the threads
    Threads of confusion, lust, agony, jealousy
    Of every negative feelings that I conceive
    You’re the one responsible for EVERYTHING

    Get off my mind and life forever
    Go and stick and rob someone else’s soul
    I don’t want to live off my memories
    I want to live…

    Ignore me all you want,
    Curse me with whatever comes into your pea brain
    The familiar anticipation of warmth and love will not degrade

    I don’t want to be the sensitive boy
    Who always bends and flutters like a feather
    Even by the lightest of breezes

    I won’t be a scavenger who feeds off rotten things
    I won’t be an idiot who falls in line with the scum
    I don’t want to be used and thrown away like garbage

    I am who I am, what I want to be
    There is nothing that is going to change the way I feel
    There will be no turning back on my past
    And there certainly will not be any negativity residing underneath

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    Re: Breakout

    Ouch! that must off hurt!!!!!!!!!
    Nice poem I really enjoy it. You were really mad when you wrote it huh.
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    Re: Breakout

    No not really, I just wrote it to show what people go through., and how it feels.

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    Re: Breakout

    A truly wonderful poem, I like it a lot!!!
    It was really interesting to read it, there really are a lot of feelings and anger in it, I love the way you've expressed everything you feel to this person, couldn't leave anyone cold hearted and not ashamed of what they've done, I too feel sorry for what I've done to my boyfriend when reading this...
    This is a really good work, I admire it, I really do...

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    Re: Breakout

    rave thats an awsome poem but it does show the feelings of someone tryin to run your life.

    i loved the last few lines the most there really meaning ful and easy to relate to the whole poem ^__^ 10/10

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    Re: Breakout

    A very nice poem.

    And it does show how someone can ruin your life...

    And it does have a lot of anger...in it...

    I give it a 10 out of 10. ^___^

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    Re: Breakout

    ouch!!! talk about makin' someone think that you are talking about them.... god... what a mean... but sad little poem... I like it^^

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    Re: Breakout

    I'm trying my best to take this poem seriously. But all I hear is, "Waahhhhh!!".

    I mean honestly. No one is "responsible" for EVERYTHING that upsets you. Suck it up and get over it.


    Oh. Nice poem, by the way.

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