The sky is burning out at a dull
pink and red.
Your face is highlighted with
the early summer's glow.
Eyes made of melted gold and fallen
pieces of the sky engulf my bright chocolate spheres.
Birds dive at the water catching the
minos brave enough to come to the surface and play.
The firefiles are pletiful, adding just enough
light with the moon.
Darkness slowly wraps its way around our
entwined figures; we are one.
My fingers wrapped softly in your
hair and yours gently holding my face.
Your lips are a perfect oval of desire
as my own lock with yours.
My hand slightly caresses the delicate
curve of your back.
Bodies melted into one another,
the earth we have made our own memory.
The night air is hot and damp, matting our hair and lighting
our eyes a fire.
Gasping, the slight breeze fills our lungs full.
We are the light in the sky that
never grows dull.
wipes a tear from eye"" begins to clap" ill go see that if was made into a three second movie and even pay the $7.50 thats comes with it great poem fine work ill be looking for the next one
Aww..that so sweet! thank you very much ^-^ and guess what? it took me maybe ten minutes to write it. When I spend two days on a poem it sucks, but when I spend two minutes on a poem...its great. I am so weird 0.o
Wow!!!! This is just great!!! A wonderful poem... full of blissful love... I adore it!!!! Your poems really are great!!! I'm willing to read more...
And the description of suroundings... it just makes me dreamy... wonderful!!!!
Wow! Very excelent job Ofeliasfire! I give this two thumbs up because I really enjoyed it!
i guess that means that writing poems on impulse works better for you
Yeah I suppose thats right ^-^ I'm not really sure myself, but oh well. What about you...how do you write poems?
normally while im taking a shower i seem to think better in the bathroom