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    Bridge

    I built a bridge out of nowhere,
    across nothingness and wondered
    if there would be something on the other side.

    I built a bridge out of fog,
    across darkness and hoped that
    there would be light on the other side.

    I built a bridge out of despair,
    across oblivion and knew that
    there would be hope on the other side.

    I built a bridge out of hell,
    across chaos and trusted that
    there would be strength on the other side.

    I built a bridge,
    and crossed it,
    but there was no one there to meet me
    on the other side.

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Bridge

    i like this poem very much. it seems kinda sad but its still nice.

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    Re: Bridge

    Hmm...unsure and uncertainess creates fear... and despair in searching of hope out of the blindingness...the little ray of light...

    This is good... it's nicely done...i like it... ^^ good use of the methaphore...

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    Re: Bridge

    This sound really sad, But i love it.

    I love your last verse...^_^ It made me think quite deeply.

    Plus...my my...your words were scary xD :/ they somehow made me fear you *lol* ^_^

    I want to hear more from you soon! ^_^

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    Re: Bridge

    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    I built a bridge out of nowhere,
    across nothingness and wondered
    if there would be something on the other side.

    I built a bridge out of fog,
    across darkness and hoped that
    there would be light on the other side.

    I built a bridge out of despair,
    across oblivion and knew that
    there would be hope on the other side.

    I built a bridge out of hell,
    across chaos and trusted that
    there would be strength on the other side.

    I built a bridge,
    and crossed it,
    but there was no one there to meet me
    on the other side.
    I'll meet you on the other side! Your poems have a tendency toward sadness and loneliness . . . Why is that? Anyway, another very good one. Don't stop!

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    Re: Bridge

    First Thanks all for your sweet comments there Iam glad that you find it Good ....

    Quote Originally Posted by divine_punishment View Post
    I'll meet you on the other side! Your poems have a tendency toward sadness and loneliness . . . Why is that? Anyway, another very good one. Don't stop!
    oh kiss there Thanks divine ..Huh you will meet me in other side ..*sigh*..Thanks ..^^

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Bridge

    A poem by Jim Sinclair, featured on page 32 of the book "Targeting Autism: What We Know, Don't Know, and Can Do to Help Young Children with Autism and Related Disorders" by Shirley Cohen

    Targeting Autism: What We Know, Don ... - Google Book Search

    It's still plagiarism even if you leave out lines and change a word here and there.

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