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    Brighten

    We cannot all be famous
    or be listed in who's who
    but everybody, great or small
    has important work to do

    For rarely do we reealize
    the importance of small deeds
    or to what degree of greatness
    unnoticed kindness leads

    It's not the celebrity's
    in a world of fame adn praise
    but it's doing unpreteniously
    in and udistinguished way

    THe work that god assigned us
    unimportant as it seems
    makes our task outstanding
    brings reality to dreams

    So do not sit and idly wish
    for wider and new dimensions
    where you can put into practice
    your good intentions

    But at the apot god placed you
    begin at once to do
    little things that brighten up
    the lives surrounding you

    If everyone brightened up
    the spot where their standing
    by being more considerate
    and a little less demanding

    This dark old world would
    eclipse the evening star
    if everybody brightened up
    the corner where they are!


    I would like to dedicate this poem to rave_grip because he has had some tough times and has always managed to brighten up my day!

    Thanks Rave!
    Last edited by Jamie5192; Jul 19, 2007 at 10:38 AM.

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    Re: Brighten

    Holy crap I love this a LOT. It made me smile. Especially because I've been thinking just exactly the same thing so much lately. I don't know when it became okay for individuals to be so selfish and only care about themselves rather then try and brighten the lives of those around them. Lately it seems everyones just trying to make everyone misrible. And that's ****ed up.

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    Re: Brighten

    I have the same feelings... only mine are a bit more complex... some people acctually make it their mission in life and i just don't understand that.

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    Re: Brighten

    Wow! I love it,
    And man yeah this is like a realy good poem.
    I loved everything about.
    And the way you put it together. Just wow.
    And yeah if everyone did brighten up
    thenthis world would be a better place to live.
    I totally agree.

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    Re: Brighten

    Quote Originally Posted by P.R. Princes View Post
    Wow! I love it,
    And man yeah this is like a realy good poem.
    I loved everything about.
    And the way you put it together. Just wow.
    And yeah if everyone did brighten up
    thenthis world would be a better place to live.
    I totally agree.
    Thanks^^ it means alot that you think all that about my poem, both of you.

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