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    The Brightside

    Title: The Brightside
    By: piggy

    Concealed behind the tainted filth reality,
    underneath the rotting molded dock of frustration,
    behind the chaotic orchestra of discontent,
    believe, there is a brightside,

    in the company of loving kindred,
    where your faith is unyielding and strengthened to the core,
    a place of friendly and familiar faces,
    shining shimmering and splendid,
    it compells you to stand and march forward,

    A brilliant paradise of hopeful truths,
    a heaven of your timely wit,
    your amazing grace, your natural refinement,

    find it in the reflecting pool,
    where the mirror is clear in its duplication,
    your face is not the illusion,
    for the brightside is just inside.

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: The Brightside

    That brought chills to me. You ever feel like you were having a bad day, and then someone told you exactly what you needed to hear to lift your spirits? Well that was what your poem did for me. Thanks for sharing this. Its truely beautiful.
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    Re: The Brightside

    shining shimmering and splendid
    That line reminded me of the disney movie, Aladdin.

    Nice poem, pigtaru. I'd love to hear more from you. Keep up the great work.

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    Re: The Brightside

    wow trung anoither aweosme poem
    and i like how you described being happy
    it really made me smile , and im glad
    to see my buddy posting agaiin
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Brightside

    find it in the reflecting pool,
    where the mirror is clear in its duplication,
    your face is not the illusion,
    for the brightside is just inside.
    I loved that part and it sent chills down my spin too. It was awsome Piggy I can't wait to see another one from you.
    ™Mommy To Micah And Shawn!™


    Thanks For The Amazing Tag Pyro!

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