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    Newbie inuyashagurl may be famous one day inuyashagurl may be famous one day inuyashagurl's Avatar
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    Smile broken

    My heart is breaking
    My soul is shaking
    My life is flashing before me
    You told me you loved me
    You told me you would be there
    How was I suppose to
    Know that it was all a lie
    Were they wasted words
    Or did they mean something
    Are you in love with me
    Oor is it all a game to you
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: broken

    The rhyming isnt needed. In fact, it doesnt make me want to read the poem.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: broken

    oh kk that is...yeah! Well Isay you cant win them all, but at least you tried
    Last edited by kinetic; Dec 14, 2006 at 08:51 PM. Reason: bad grammar
    MAY YOU DAY BE BRIGHT, AND YOUR ASSOCATION WITH MORONS BE MINIMAL. EXTRA MEDICATION FOR ALL!!!

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