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    Re: Broken

    I think that this is good the way it is as far as shape goes. (especially since a poet should never force stanzas if it breaks the thought.) This is particularly important with a short piece such as this because a separate stanza would imply a shift.

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    Also, mods were threatening to close this thread (the entire poetry section) if specific and detailed responses were not posted ie. if you have a response make it count give helpful suggestions with specifics like individual places that might need a little tweaking or whatever. Why? So that everyone can grow.

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