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    Broken Hearted

    Here's a poem that I just wrote.It's dark....very dark lol Since it's about someone who made me feel this way.It's about my "ex" lol. But I hope everybody will like it..even if it's just a little lol.Please comment,thanks


    Title-Broken Hearted

    I don't understand how you could Love me
    I'm so Sick and Twisted inside
    How can you even bear to look at Me?
    Are you really even seeing me?
    Can you see the Darkness within Me?!

    "Please Leave Me Be"

    Don't come near me
    Don't touch me
    I'm shacking in Fear
    The Tears wont stop coming

    "Don't Come Any Closer"

    Why are you still here?
    I don't understand this!
    You've seen how i've become
    You've seen what I am inside
    Yet you wish to be by my side

    "Why Are You Doing This?"

    I've tryed to Push you away
    Time after Time
    But you just wont Leave Me Be!
    You say you Love Me
    Over and Over again
    But how can I trust something that I can no longer feel!

    "Why Do You Want Me?"

    My Heart is full of Darkness
    It is surrounded by walls of Ice
    Never to be reached again
    For I Never want to die of a Broken Heart again!...
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    Re: Broken Hearted

    wow yet another aweosme peoms and trust and love are really
    important and you just dont give it to anyone. thats for sure you
    push away and he still stays love like that is rare me being 33 i can honestly say that love like that never happens that much and when it does keep it it dosnt come around that often . i love this poem very much it reminds me of how fragile
    love can be and how trust is just a tiny thread that can be cut with out notice.
    i really like how you expressed this
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Broken Hearted

    Wow,thanks for the awesome comment Big Bro
    I'm very happy that you liked it.
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    Re: Broken Hearted

    I liked your poem too.It reminds me of how my ex husband treated me.Btw, we haven't talked in a while. how have you been?

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    Thank you very much CherryBlosson18 I'm happy that you liked it.
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    you are so welcome.How's it goin'

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    Re: Broken Hearted

    Wow, nice poem, true descriptionf of emotions, awesome ^_^

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    Re: Broken Hearted

    o that is so preety i right poetry but thats the one of my favorite

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