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    Re: Broken Hearted

    nice poem..................................it was really.........................i dont know the word..........

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    @ Rave_Grip-Thanks for the great comment Ravey

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    Re: Broken Hearted

    it was good, but kind of bland. use more descriptive words for basic ones like 'darkness', 'sick and twisted', and 'walls of ice'

    with better words it can become a lot better. also why did you capitalize every begining letter to every word. it wasn't necassary. it is a cheap trick to get across emotion. let the emotion come, dont use cheap tricks. otherwise it was good

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    Thanks Zyta.
    I'll try 2 do better.I was just writting from the heart when I did this.I was really upset and was trying 2 get all of the feelings out of me lol
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    Re: Broken Hearted

    the poem you made Shini, is really interesting. it is because it is a product of emotions. this poem somewhat leaves me "dying inside" idea.
    all in all, great poem!

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    Wow,thank you soooo much Raja *gives you a big hug* I'm very happy that you thought it was good
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    Re: Broken Hearted

    great like all the other ones shini!!!!! u really are a talented poet


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    Thank you very N!TRO I'm happy that you liked it
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