hey kool. i really like tis one. nc job. althought it'll be nicer if it were longer XD
a kinda angsty poem... please drop by a comment... let me know what you think... thanks!!
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Metaphor: Broken Love
Invisible chains clasp my hands
Unseen bars set shadows on my face
The night is still and weary
The laughter is drowned in silence
I'm a prisoner of my own illusions
Now forever bound in fear
Fear of somehow loving again
Fear of once more being shattered
Only tears could be the reward
Of a love that was broken
Fixated
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Last edited by sachiko ueto; Apr 26, 2006 at 12:11 AM.
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hey kool. i really like tis one. nc job. althought it'll be nicer if it were longer XD
Nice work keep it up and show us more ^O^
I like it. Very cool. I love things about love, even if they are short. ^_^ Keep up the good work.![]()
i liked it, it reminded me of myself, i was just that way until last week, i got new g/f and im almost positive we're gonan be together for a long while if not forever, but they might be some high expectations >.<;
"If I told you I didn't do it... would you believe me"-Kyo
nice work there man. I like it. Keep it up
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
thanks, guys! i really appreciate it!! you gave me drive for another work...
They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.
This is outstanding! I think u should continue such work.![]()
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