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    Broken Love

    a kinda angsty poem... please drop by a comment... let me know what you think... thanks!!

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    Metaphor: Broken Love

    Invisible chains clasp my hands
    Unseen bars set shadows on my face
    The night is still and weary
    The laughter is drowned in silence
    I'm a prisoner of my own illusions
    Now forever bound in fear
    Fear of somehow loving again
    Fear of once more being shattered
    Only tears could be the reward
    Of a love that was broken

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    Re: Broken Love

    hey kool. i really like tis one. nc job. althought it'll be nicer if it were longer XD

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    Re: Broken Love

    Nice work keep it up and show us more ^O^

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    Re: Broken Love

    I like it. Very cool. I love things about love, even if they are short. ^_^ Keep up the good work.
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    Re: Broken Love

    i liked it, it reminded me of myself, i was just that way until last week, i got new g/f and im almost positive we're gonan be together for a long while if not forever, but they might be some high expectations >.<;


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    Re: Broken Love

    nice work there man. I like it. Keep it up

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    thanks, guys! i really appreciate it!! you gave me drive for another work...

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    Re: Broken Love

    This is outstanding! I think u should continue such work.

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