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    Re: Broken Love

    thanks guys for the comments and inspiration as well! now, here's round 2 for sachiko ueto a.k.a the poet.... hope you like it.... keep the comments going....

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    Sonnet: Flight

    I looked up and the sun wasn't there
    So many things I kept inside
    So many things I wanted to say
    The rain, slowly drenching me
    The pain...
    Do I have to run to you
    Knowing you've flown away
    Faraway...
    Wil I run to you
    Even if I knew you wouldn't care
    How could I run to you
    If you'll never be there
    For me

    A tear
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    *claps* that was awesome man, keep it up.

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    Re: Broken Love

    hye, thanks!! so here's the next one... keep the comments going...

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    Metaphor: Skyline

    I used to think all was fine
    The mirror showed no reflection
    Minority
    You taught me how to love
    You showed me how to love
    Anxiety
    How could you
    Now you've flown away from me
    Vacuous

    No stars tonight
    A broken utopia
    No stars tonight
    Not you and me
    No stars tonight
    Nothing left to guide me
    No stars tonight
    Nothing

    Empty
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    this next one is a kinda personal... but I want to share it anyway.... this is dedicated to the father I've never seen and met... I doubt he would ever read this, though.... because he's up there somewhere.... so here it is....

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    A Promise: Heaven's Wings

    I've neve seen you
    Would you reach me with your wings
    I guess I never will
    But will you reach me with your wings
    I look up at the sky
    Nothing much
    But could you reach me with your wings
    I want to see you
    There's nothing I could do
    Maybe yes
    Maybe no
    I just want to feel you by my side
    If you'll reach me with your wings

    A promise
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    Re: Broken Love

    That's nice work, Sachiko! Keep them comming ^_^

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    Re: Broken Love

    Wow, i'm left speechless here. To the dad u nvr had n the skyline poem is good. I like it. Keep it up.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    thanks a lot, guys!! you rock....

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    Re: Broken Love

    Quote Originally Posted by sachiko ueto
    thanks guys for the comments and inspiration as well! now, here's round 2 for sachiko ueto a.k.a the poet.... hope you like it.... keep the comments going....

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    Sonnet: Flight

    I looked up and the sun wasn't there
    So many things I kept inside
    So many things I wanted to say
    The rain, slowly drenching me
    The pain...
    Do I have to run to you
    Knowing you've flown away
    Faraway...
    Wil I run to you
    Even if I knew you wouldn't care
    How could I run to you
    If you'll never be there
    For me

    A tear
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    This poem hit the spot for me...very well done. Keep it up.!

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Broken Love

    wow, thanks, you guys... I never really thought I would get those kind of comments! thanks so much! here's the next one... hope you like it...
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    Kaleidoscope

    The night is clear
    But I'll be with you tonight
    The stars are hiding
    But don't worry
    I'm here
    Right here

    The city lights spark with melancholy
    Danger
    But I'll be by your side
    They've turned off their lights
    The city's asleep

    You don't care
    Neither do I
    I'll never leave your side
    Never let you go

    'Coz this world's a kaleidoscope
    Let yourself unfold
    I'm just here beside you
    To never let you go
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