Broken Rose

Here's some Lyrics that I just wrote today.I hope their okay.I think they came out good. :) Well I hope everyone enjoys it.Please comment,thank you. :)


Title-Broken Rose

Come on baby
I need some lovin tonight
Don't make me break
Just hold me tight

I wanna see the nothern lights
I wanna see the deep blue sea
I wanna see the stars
I wanna fly high,just for the night

Come on baby
Don't leave me alone tonight
I'm so broken inside
Can't you stay the night?

Will you hold me tight
Just for the night
I don't wanna break
I just want some lovin tonight!

Will you please hold me
I need your lovin
I'm so broken inside
Kiss all the pieces back together!

Come on baby
I need some lovin
Don't make me break
Just hold me tight
Even if it's just for the night
I need your Love!

awesomre song reminds me of a gril i knoew 13 years ago she was really the romantic typ all about oceans and night skies very good song cant wait to read the next one

Thank you very much for the great comment HolderOfTheDarkChalice.I'm very happy that you liked it. :)

your welcome and call me chris ,chris h since there are so many chris's here

OKay I will.I'll call you Chris H from now on then lol :) But i'm am very happy that you liked my song. To tell the truth I just wrote it a few minutes ago lol :)

Wow nice lyrics! They're awesome!!!

Thanks Shuichi-fan :) I'm very happy that you think their awesome :) lol

I good one! I like it^^ You