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    Broken Rose

    Here's some Lyrics that I just wrote today.I hope their okay.I think they came out good. Well I hope everyone enjoys it.Please comment,thank you.


    Title-Broken Rose

    Come on baby
    I need some lovin tonight
    Don't make me break
    Just hold me tight

    I wanna see the nothern lights
    I wanna see the deep blue sea
    I wanna see the stars
    I wanna fly high,just for the night

    Come on baby
    Don't leave me alone tonight
    I'm so broken inside
    Can't you stay the night?

    Will you hold me tight
    Just for the night
    I don't wanna break
    I just want some lovin tonight!

    Will you please hold me
    I need your lovin
    I'm so broken inside
    Kiss all the pieces back together!

    Come on baby
    I need some lovin
    Don't make me break
    Just hold me tight
    Even if it's just for the night
    I need your Love!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Broken Rose

    awesomre song reminds me of a gril i knoew 13 years ago she was really the romantic typ all about oceans and night skies very good song cant wait to read the next one
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Broken Rose

    Thank you very much for the great comment HolderOfTheDarkChalice.I'm very happy that you liked it.
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    Re: Broken Rose

    your welcome and call me chris ,chris h since there are so many chris's here
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Broken Rose

    OKay I will.I'll call you Chris H from now on then lol But i'm am very happy that you liked my song. To tell the truth I just wrote it a few minutes ago lol
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    Re: Broken Rose

    Wow nice lyrics! They're awesome!!!

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    Thanks Shuichi-fan I'm very happy that you think their awesome lol
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    Re: Broken Rose

    I good one! I like it^^ You
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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