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    Broken Saints(one of many)

    Who are you??
    What am I??
    Who am I??
    What are you??

    I am a broken saint.

    My blood rages.
    I can't hold back any longer,
    But I must or risk losing it all.

    I doubt you know yourself.
    Trust yourself.
    Only then do have have a chance to contain your being.

    What is truth??
    I'll tell you,
    Truth is a fragile thing.
    And unlike so many other things,
    Truth is not one thing.

    Knowing this and now desperate and enveloped in fear,
    You struggle to climb the rope of fate in front of you,
    Then pry open those gates of destiny that lie ahead,
    Only to find your truth was with you all along.

    Don't let your soul slip from your grasp.
    Open your mind,
    Reconcile your fears and take action before you regret it.

    Or else...........

    You'll end up like me,
    A broken saint,
    Only started on the beginning of a singular eternity,
    Omniscient seeing all that goes on in grief,
    But unable to do anything about it.


    One of my poems, I dunno I got bored and wrote it. I do this a lot.

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    Re: Broken Saints(one of many)

    I like this, its an interesting view of life. I would never have worded it the way you have, but in reading... I find most of what you say to be true in ways.

    I Esspecially like the part of struggling to climb the rope of fate not knowing the truth was with you all along.

    Most of us tend to fit that description.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Broken Saints(one of many)

    Thanks for taking the time to read it, I was feeling a bit out of it when I wrote this. Mainly I wrote it because the next day I had to be the master of ceremonies for an event, and promised a new poem.

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