Built strong!

Ichigo_06 · Nov 07, 2007, 08:27 AM

You have one thing to accomplish,
you have done everything else,
You can see it clearly although at times it isnt

With the sight of a bright light,
ahead in the distance, you see a blockade,
You know you can get over it, you know you can succeed

With however many blocades and barriers,
You will be heading strong to the light of success,
nothing will stop you as you plow through all obsticals

No matter the size of it you will get over it,
Never waiver from your path and always keep your site high
We are Human we make mistakes, we get over them,

Never look down and never look back, always move and always
Always go forward.

Sorry about the randomisity of this one guys I had a different one in mind but you know. anyways tell me what you think and be honest please.

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 07, 2007, 08:32 AM

Very encouraging and insightful! This has got to be a new favorite of mine by you! Good work, Ichigo and keep it up! It gets better and better each time. ^_^

Ichigo_06 · Nov 07, 2007, 08:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by atomik_sprout

Very encouraging and insightful! This has got to be a new favorite of mine by you! Good work, Ichigo and keep it up! It gets better and better each time. ^_^

Why thanks Sprout and you are welcome for the encouragement althuogh it was rather random I ment something else to show but kind of came up with this. Thank you for your support and you have mine as well!

highteckdudu · Nov 07, 2007, 08:43 AM

Great job Ichigo! Keep it up! it was just a bit confusing though! but i like it! kepup the good work!

Ichigo_06 · Nov 07, 2007, 08:56 AM

Why thank you kim I am glad you like my confusingness and randomnisisty of poems. lol thanks I will post again soon I hope! I will inform you right away.

highteckdudu · Nov 07, 2007, 08:58 AM

well you didnt with this one! But thank you, wait why am i thanking you? hmm.... oh well keep it up!

*RayMe* · Nov 07, 2007, 10:08 AM

Quote:

nothing will stop you as you plow through all obsticals

heads up~! theres a spelling mistake there

obstacles... ^^

nicely done... i like this one...encouraging indeed ^^ keep it up

Ichigo_06 · Nov 07, 2007, 10:22 AM

thank you Ray me I appreciate it what where is that darn typo oopsi sorry bout that. lol I will anialate it.

Frozen Rose · Nov 07, 2007, 12:32 PM

I LIKE IT really i like it ......... i can't say more because it is so cool
so good job
good for you ^_^

Ichigo_06 · Nov 07, 2007, 12:34 PM

Thanks again frozen rose I am glad it was enjoyable for you.

Frozen Rose · Nov 07, 2007, 01:12 PM

you welcome i do what i have to do
for me i enjoyed read it and I'm happy that i read it
and all the thank for you because you write such a beautiful poem so thanx ^_^

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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,744	Built strong! You have one thing to accomplish, you have done everything else, You can see it clearly although at times it isnt With the sight of a bright light, ahead in the distance, you see a blockade, You know you can get over it, you know you can succeed With however many blocades and barriers, You will be heading strong to the light of success, nothing will stop you as you plow through all obsticals No matter the size of it you will get over it, Never waiver from your path and always keep your site high We are Human we make mistakes, we get over them, Never look down and never look back, always move and always Always go forward. Sorry about the randomisity of this one guys I had a different one in mind but you know. anyways tell me what you think and be honest please. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	Re: Built strong! Very encouraging and insightful! This has got to be a new favorite of mine by you! Good work, Ichigo and keep it up! It gets better and better each time. ^_^ __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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highteckdudu Where the journey begins! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that! Posts: 599 Thanks: 3 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 155,851	Re: Built strong! Great job Ichigo! Keep it up! it was just a bit confusing though! but i like it! kepup the good work! __________________ I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass! Visit www.highteckdudu.webs.com!
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,744	Re: Built strong! Why thank you kim I am glad you like my confusingness and randomnisisty of poems. lol thanks I will post again soon I hope! I will inform you right away. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,744	Re: Built strong! thank you Ray me I appreciate it what where is that darn typo oopsi sorry bout that. lol I will anialate it. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,744	Re: Built strong! Thanks again frozen rose I am glad it was enjoyable for you. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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Frozen Rose Teddy Bear =^_^= Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Somewhere on Saturn Posts: 657 Thanks: 6 Thanked 31 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 20,231	Re: Built strong! you welcome i do what i have to do for me i enjoyed read it and I'm happy that i read it and all the thank for you because you write such a beautiful poem so thanx ^_^
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