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Reply With QuoteAww its so sad, but good, you did a good job on it 10/10, but there are some grammer mistakes which isn't so bad. Good job though. Hope everything gets better.
~Ambi Bambi
i wake with a smile
go to school have a balst till then that moment when everything changes.
things go wrong people are picking on you punchs kicks ect.
you never thought it could get so bad.
you thought it would just go away if you left it.
but it never did now you cry ever night.
hit things for no reson.
thinking why why pick on me just me.
i havent done anything wrong.
so cry your eyes out never let go of your pain.
save it all up see how it gets to you.
suacide muder any of them it could happen.
but lets just hope for a good xmas and wish for it all to end
Aww its so sad, but good, you did a good job on it 10/10, but there are some grammer mistakes which isn't so bad. Good job though. Hope everything gets better.
~Ambi Bambi
Thanks lifeforce! (:
good poem spelling errors a few, I think that you should just overlook bully's or people that want to pick on you. Everyone in the world goes through the same thing at least once in their life i think its better just to think of it as on of lifes troubles that will be gone eventually. You are always going to find people taht hate or dont like you, its just best tnot to take it personal and just forget them.
-Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-|THE INFAMOUS CHEETOS OVERLORD||IceNineKills|
aww thanks for the help TT__TT it really means alot thanks
and yeah me little spelling errorr girl lmao
~! It's nice, Equinn, but there is always some room for improvement. Next time, check all the spelling, you know, because you don't want to repeat them mistakes, and try to break your poem into stanzes. That would make it easy to read. ^^ Anyways, keep up the good work!
They punch and kick? O_O'' I hope that's just made up for this poem!Originally Posted by equinn
@kedar well thanks for that ill keep it in mind
and the puncks and kicks not made up this time sorries to have to say that TT__TT
Last edited by equinn; Dec 18, 2006 at 09:24 AM.
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