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    The last time I laughed was never,
    the last time I cried was today,
    The last time I was pushed over was five minutes ago,
    Every school day seems to go on and on....


    The last time I bled was yesterday,
    The last time I went without food was break,
    The last time I sat by myself was....everyday.
    I pray for the end of school to save me.


    The last time I had a friend was pre-school,
    The last time I played with a person was then,
    The last time I had the will to live was....


    I can't remember,
    I won't be returning to school in September

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    Re: bullying

    the flow was kinda choppy but it was a nice read. good job tho =]
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    Re: bullying

    Not a bad poem. Like what "blackrose92" said, it's nice to read. Practice makes perfect! =D

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    Re: bullying

    Ahahah I'm sorry , Im only laughing because your display picture is dr evil and I couldn't help but picture him saying it... the poem itself really is up there as far as thought is concerned (supposing you're not in that situation yourself) you did a really good job putting it from the victim's perspective. Keep up the good work.

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