the burden

i have lent
the burden
of my heart on you

but its yours now
and you can keep it
i dont want it back

you probably didnt
want the responsibility
but i didnt want it anyway

yea I like thsi one too. And all your poems are about the same langth. thats cooly.lol.

But yes I love you poems. they r very good.

thank you very much im making a website that has my new book im making not proffesionally though and im gonna make it available for purchase this will includepoems too personal to put on here and some off here when im done with it ill pm you the name of it

oh wow that is soo cooly.

Yea your poemes r awsome
ok cooly Id love that. thanks.

This poem was great^_^ Ypu always write excellent poems.. i'm proud of you.. keep up the great work and more^^

thank you guys very much if you want to see my page go to
http://www.freewebs.com/onlinebookofpoems/

It's actually quite good, a little short but it's good, just practise a little more :D

well this was made as a class assignment so this was how long it was supposed to be i had little lines to work with but i used what i had