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    the burden

    i have lent
    the burden
    of my heart on you

    but its yours now
    and you can keep it
    i dont want it back

    you probably didnt
    want the responsibility
    but i didnt want it anyway

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    Re: the burden

    yea I like thsi one too. And all your poems are about the same langth. thats cooly.lol.

    But yes I love you poems. they r very good.

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    thank you very much im making a website that has my new book im making not proffesionally though and im gonna make it available for purchase this will includepoems too personal to put on here and some off here when im done with it ill pm you the name of it

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    Re: the burden

    oh wow that is soo cooly.

    Yea your poemes r awsome
    ok cooly Id love that. thanks.

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    Re: the burden

    This poem was great^_^ Ypu always write excellent poems.. i'm proud of you.. keep up the great work and more^^

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    Re: the burden

    thank you guys very much if you want to see my page go to
    http://www.freewebs.com/onlinebookofpoems/

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    Re: the burden

    It's actually quite good, a little short but it's good, just practise a little more

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    Re: the burden

    well this was made as a class assignment so this was how long it was supposed to be i had little lines to work with but i used what i had

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