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Reply With QuoteIt's short but good. You make a very good point between men and women. That almost sounds like a taunt at the end of it.lol Good job keep up the good work.
"Woman heats up like an iron,
Man like an electric light."
It's true, it's true;
I burn for you.
You keep me warm at night.
A fire burns most brightly
before you are plunged into dark.
Do you? You, too?
I always knew
Your bite was worse than your bark.
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It's short, I know. Other than that, how was it?
(Quote by Fr. Callum, the most crazy, ADD, old English priest I know)
It's short but good. You make a very good point between men and women. That almost sounds like a taunt at the end of it.lol Good job keep up the good work.
Thanks. I guess it was a bit of one.Originally Posted by fireandice
Fr. Callum is a BAMF.
i really like this poem. i also like how you made the point between woman and men. GGood JOB!! =)
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woman... bites....
I did not like the ending much... but this part...
"A fire burns most brightly
before you are plunged into dark.
Do you? You, too?"
i love the methaphore there man.. it was sweet~! nicely done @.@
Keep it up manLove it ^^
sounds like a useless candle to me...
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@ Bautifulsoul - Thanks! The distinction is important to make! We are so different!
@ RayMe - Thanks, man. The last line was actually an inside joke with a friend of mine.
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