I like this.. has some nice imagery.. tons of grammatical and spelling errors but I'll forgive you 'cause your spanish :P
longer than evry fish in the ocean
higher than any mountin in the earth
farther than all the starts in the heaven
while i look at the heaven
i thougth about u
ur stronger than any whale in the dark sea
more beutifull than any flower that has bloom
deeper than any forest that have ever grew
i though about u
shower in the springs
butterflys through the falls of the forest
starts stuck in ur eyes steady like a peeble
with burning love in the book of our life
forever
thats what all the pages say
i've been in love with u
singing birds in shining morning
wind bringin love
to our hearts really gentle
shining light giving
the hope
to hold forever
and the sky telling me
that i've been in love with u
forever.
Last edited by Baal; Aug 20, 2006 at 04:10 PM.
perdoname michelle!
I like this.. has some nice imagery.. tons of grammatical and spelling errors but I'll forgive you 'cause your spanish :P
Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu|23
I like it. no scratch that. I LOVE it. =P keep it uuup
"I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
Cool!!! I love it!!!! Keep it up!!!
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Sappy enough to make me hurl........Good enough poem to make me clap..................
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
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