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    ''Burning love forever''

    longer than evry fish in the ocean
    higher than any mountin in the earth
    farther than all the starts in the heaven
    while i look at the heaven
    i thougth about u
    ur stronger than any whale in the dark sea
    more beutifull than any flower that has bloom
    deeper than any forest that have ever grew
    i though about u


    shower in the springs
    butterflys through the falls of the forest
    starts stuck in ur eyes steady like a peeble
    with burning love in the book of our life
    forever
    thats what all the pages say
    i've been in love with u

    singing birds in shining morning
    wind bringin love
    to our hearts really gentle
    shining light giving
    the hope
    to hold forever
    and the sky telling me
    that i've been in love with u
    forever.
    Last edited by Baal; Aug 20, 2006 at 04:10 PM.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: ''Burning love forever''

    I like this.. has some nice imagery.. tons of grammatical and spelling errors but I'll forgive you 'cause your spanish :P
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    Re: ''Burning love forever''

    I like it. no scratch that. I LOVE it. =P keep it uuup
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: ''Burning love forever''

    Cool!!! I love it!!!! Keep it up!!!
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    Re: ''Burning love forever''

    Sappy enough to make me hurl........Good enough poem to make me clap..................
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: ''Burning love forever''

    Quote Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23 View Post
    Sappy enough to make me hurl........Good enough poem to make me clap..................
    ye thanx lord of kindness



    perdoname michelle!

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