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now this is touching, truly, it has some kind of meaning like love connection but it was broke, you real good, hope to see more of your work, keep it up
One time you loved me,
Knowing who I was.
Wanting me to be happy,
Like a forever burning flame.
After over a year on,
Flames start to fade.
More harsh you become
Putting arrows within me.
Preventing this pain,
Was I tried to do.
But one more aimed arrow,
Hit my heart and made it shatter.
Knowing I was too weak,
You made that final call.
I wanted to be accepted for me
But that deal was denied.
Now I lie it pieces,
Knowing my world ended.
The flame put out,
Nothing of me is left.
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now this is touching, truly, it has some kind of meaning like love connection but it was broke, you real good, hope to see more of your work, keep it up
nice poem zas, i never thought that you were os freaking goood at writting poems. Keep up the good work.
Ketaro - i am not really that good
Thank you for you comments hope more people like it.
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Its really good Sazzy...
I understand how you feel completely and it happens
Thank you solking
I hope it made some sense and the pain came across ok
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T.T i know wut it's like to be in this pain sazz. it's so unreal tht u think it shouldnt be there....where did it all go wrong...u know and this poem made sense with me.....i've had the unfortunate experience but it's made me stronger and i hope tht u'll get stronger too sazz!! great poem and it flowed for me
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
I know exactly how this feel and you put the pain into this poem perfectly! Excellent job and thank you for sharing it with me!
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