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    Burnt Flame

    One time you loved me,
    Knowing who I was.
    Wanting me to be happy,
    Like a forever burning flame.

    After over a year on,
    Flames start to fade.
    More harsh you become
    Putting arrows within me.

    Preventing this pain,
    Was I tried to do.
    But one more aimed arrow,
    Hit my heart and made it shatter.

    Knowing I was too weak,
    You made that final call.
    I wanted to be accepted for me
    But that deal was denied.

    Now I lie it pieces,
    Knowing my world ended.
    The flame put out,
    Nothing of me is left.
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    Re: Burnt Flame

    now this is touching, truly, it has some kind of meaning like love connection but it was broke, you real good, hope to see more of your work, keep it up

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    Re: Burnt Flame

    nice poem zas, i never thought that you were os freaking goood at writting poems. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Burnt Flame

    Ketaro - i am not really that good

    Thank you for you comments hope more people like it.
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    Re: Burnt Flame

    Its really good Sazzy...
    I understand how you feel completely and it happens

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    Re: Burnt Flame

    Thank you solking

    I hope it made some sense and the pain came across ok
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    Re: Burnt Flame

    T.T i know wut it's like to be in this pain sazz. it's so unreal tht u think it shouldnt be there....where did it all go wrong...u know and this poem made sense with me.....i've had the unfortunate experience but it's made me stronger and i hope tht u'll get stronger too sazz!! great poem and it flowed for me

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    Re: Burnt Flame

    I know exactly how this feel and you put the pain into this poem perfectly! Excellent job and thank you for sharing it with me!

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