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Reply With Quotea young woman who is only calm during the days wen it shines, the darkness within comes out to play wen's dark. I like it, P.R. Keep it up.
Hello members of AO I made a new poem
read
put waht you think
and be a mean or nice as you feel you should
Calm
This is calm
the cherryblossom in my palm
the breeze of the wind
I dont feel pined
Being free to think my thoughts
Thinking of what has been tought
It is calm sitting under the cherryblossom
Seeing rabits,squrils, and even opossums.
running around so freely
and me watching them happily
To not be around the agony of pain
In the calm I feel sain
I hear the birds song
the cherryblossom in my palm
I feel calm
If only it would stay this way
through the darkest of days
Well thats it now post away
a young woman who is only calm during the days wen it shines, the darkness within comes out to play wen's dark. I like it, P.R. Keep it up.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
Very calm, creates a lovely image in my mind ^_^
Thanks and I have another poem so hold on and you can that one also^_^
I like it. You used some nice imagery but it flows kind of ackwardly.
Tahnks I try
sometimes it's hard to find good words to use
Yes it is. I bet it was hard to find words that sound the same and still go with the topic of the poem.
Great job I liked it because it seemed calm
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
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