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    Calm

    Hello members of AO I made a new poem
    read
    put waht you think
    and be a mean or nice as you feel you should

    Calm
    This is calm
    the cherryblossom in my palm
    the breeze of the wind
    I dont feel pined
    Being free to think my thoughts
    Thinking of what has been tought

    It is calm sitting under the cherryblossom
    Seeing rabits,squrils, and even opossums.
    running around so freely
    and me watching them happily

    To not be around the agony of pain
    In the calm I feel sain
    I hear the birds song
    the cherryblossom in my palm

    I feel calm
    If only it would stay this way
    through the darkest of days

    Well thats it now post away

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    Re: Calm

    a young woman who is only calm during the days wen it shines, the darkness within comes out to play wen's dark. I like it, P.R. Keep it up.

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    Re: Calm

    Very calm, creates a lovely image in my mind ^_^

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    Thanks and I have another poem so hold on and you can that one also^_^

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    Re: Calm

    I like it. You used some nice imagery but it flows kind of ackwardly.

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    Re: Calm

    Tahnks I try
    sometimes it's hard to find good words to use

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    Yes it is. I bet it was hard to find words that sound the same and still go with the topic of the poem.

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    Re: Calm

    Great job I liked it because it seemed calm

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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