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    The Calm before the storm?

    You feel calm, at pease, like there is no care in the world.
    However the next thing you know, your up against the storm of your rage.
    You fight to keep it down, you fight to keep it back.

    However, no matter how hard you try, you loose control.
    Lashing out at anyone near, you let it all go.
    After the storm has passed, you realize what you have done.

    You know you can not take it back, you blame it away knowing it wont help.
    The only thing you have to do is appologize now, so you do,
    When the aftershock passes, your calm again.

    How long? you ask yourself.
    How long before the next storm?
    Unlike mother nature you control the storm to an extent.

    Now in the calm clear abiss of your darkness,
    You appologize to all you have hurt,
    Some may stay, others may go, but your back again and that is what counts.

    Hey guys sorry about this one, I have been thinking about it lately and jsut got around to posting it hope you like it.
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    Re: The Calm before the storm?

    oddly enough i used those words with a freind tonight talking about
    relationships and this pomr really puts what i had siad into
    words perfectly because allstroms are calm before they do there
    damage ,no one is left unhurt.

    and nomatter if they stay or go the scare will always be there
    to remind them of how you were raging asking for forgivness is all
    you can do but at the same time is it really worth it when you know
    it will happen again? thats the risk that come with askkging for something
    that you might not be able to get again if the storm never disapears..

    i love this pome man good work.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Calm before the storm?

    I can honestly say that I've had some of those feelings. But in the end all storms can be control if you ask me. Though I wouldn't use the color green for your words, since you can have a hard time reading them. But I do agree with chalice on your poem. Very nicely done. keep up with the good work and you always know that I am here and you can always talk to me.
    Last edited by gren; Feb 04, 2008 at 04:05 PM. Reason: removed quoted poem

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