Can't take much more!!

Sincere · Oct 30, 2006, 12:41 AM

Despite what you'll all probably assume, this is NOT about my fiance. It's about a very good friend of mine and an annoyance.

I cannot take the pain that you put inside of me
When I think of things and it hurts
It’s all fighting me
Those people who hang on your every word
Will they ever go away?
This girl she likes to tag along
Pretend she’s your best friend
She won’t shut up
She waits around
Tries to get to you before I can
I’ll kick her ass
Knock her eyes right out of her head
It’s pissing me off
I’m losing my mind
From this anger you’ve settled in me
I can’t take anymore
I’m about to go off
On anyone that gets in my way
All this sh!t I’ve been through
It’s all raining down
Reminding me of everything
That could happen to any of us
Now that girl
She’s still there
What the hell does she want?
Don’t she get it?
You’ve blocked her from everything
Every memory
Every route
She is out of your life
But each day I see
She comes crawling back
Sucking up
Being friendly
Like she hasn’t annoyed the sh!t out of you
Doesn’t she know her place?
Won’t she just go away?
I can’t take much more of this stupid sh!t!!!

~ Julia

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Oct 30, 2006, 01:43 AM

wow i love this and your right poeple like that need to know when to quit agrevating other's thei poem shows how frustrating it can bem very well done
i loved it

*Kasai* · Oct 30, 2006, 02:05 AM

I wasnt a big fan of the wording and I really dislike one long stanza. Shorter stanzas are always more appealing to the eye.

*hellknight* · Oct 30, 2006, 07:07 AM

whoo, its sounds like someones is like losing their mind and cant take it really nice keep it up, i like it

Oct 30, 2006, 12:41 AM	#1 (permalink)
Sincere Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Justin's heart Posts: 307 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 364	Can't take much more!! Despite what you'll all probably assume, this is NOT about my fiance. It's about a very good friend of mine and an annoyance. I cannot take the pain that you put inside of me When I think of things and it hurts It’s all fighting me Those people who hang on your every word Will they ever go away? This girl she likes to tag along Pretend she’s your best friend She won’t shut up She waits around Tries to get to you before I can I’ll kick her ass Knock her eyes right out of her head It’s pissing me off I’m losing my mind From this anger you’ve settled in me I can’t take anymore I’m about to go off On anyone that gets in my way All this sh!t I’ve been through It’s all raining down Reminding me of everything That could happen to any of us Now that girl She’s still there What the hell does she want? Don’t she get it? You’ve blocked her from everything Every memory Every route She is out of your life But each day I see She comes crawling back Sucking up Being friendly Like she hasn’t annoyed the sh!t out of you Doesn’t she know her place? Won’t she just go away? I can’t take much more of this stupid sh!t!!! ~ Julia __________________ $C:\Documents and Settings\Julia\My Documents\My Pictures\Siggy.jpg$ A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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Oct 30, 2006, 01:43 AM	#2 (permalink)
HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,797 Thanks: 21 Thanked 21 Times in 20 Posts Credits: 3,320	Re: Can't take much more!! wow i love this and your right poeple like that need to know when to quit agrevating other's thei poem shows how frustrating it can bem very well done i loved it __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: Can't take much more!! I wasnt a big fan of the wording and I really dislike one long stanza. Shorter stanzas are always more appealing to the eye. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,448 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 15,699	Re: Can't take much more!! whoo, its sounds like someones is like losing their mind and cant take it really nice keep it up, i like it
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