can you stay?

Why cant anything go right
everything was going well
until one dark night
I come home
a night of fun and pleasure
to a home of supposed love
the amount i cannot measure
but I am greeted with yelling
curses to my very name
You yell and scream
filling me with shame
Now your leaving
theres nothing I could do
I cant live like this
I need to prove it to you
can you stay
please dont go
dont want to
be alone
stay with me please dont go
i got so much to say so
please dont leave
i'll die if you go away
please dont leave
who will be there to wipe away all my tears
i'm all alone
who will save me from all of my fears
i'm all alone
stay with me please

can you stay?
please?

This poem is beautiful...
-Wipes tears away-...
It touched me right away...
Really I liked it...
Keep it up...^_^....

thanks that means alot...seriously, that means alot to hear someone else likes my work

Nah It's okay...
I like a lot of works from you..^_^...
But yeah your right..
It means alot when someone likes your work...
It gives a feeling that you did something good...
Am I right..??

awesome poem leaving someone can be so easy when that line
has been crossed it really makes you think what is anyone's limit
when enough is enough , that is what i am getting from the poem
anyway its sad yet theres a chance for a new beginning by asking
them to stay though a lot of the time all you getin reply is a slammed door....

i like this poem very much though very awesome

dude yeah the poem is meaning full and aldough i had tot read it multiple time to understand it it is verry nice

Nice poem Demonicloud :2thumbs: but you could try making some space between the lines, i think i could be easier to read then, that's the only thing i can see, that could be improved, but you are the creater, it's your call ^^ so a really good poem :2thumbs: keep it up.. up.... up :p