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    Can you tell me...



    Can you tell me you love me...?

    Can you tell me you cared...?

    Did you ever cry for me?

    Because I can tell you I did.

    I dreamt of you and cried because I couldn’t be physically be with you.

    But now I feel bad...

    I feel like a whore even though you said I wasn’t I still believe I am.

    I have become quite perverted since our quite long ago break-up...

    Maybe it’s because I still care...



    No one knows the pain I feel to not be with you.

    I wish

    I wish

    I could only get on that plan and see you.

    Do things I always wanted to...

    But it will only happen if you want it too...

    Do you want it as much as I do...?
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    Re: Can you tell me...

    wow this is one of your moure emo ones it makes me say caz it just like how my
    ex. broke up with me(and my heart too)and it so heppen to be long distins

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    Re: Can you tell me...

    geez... perverted? i dont think thats the right word...hmm...i am not sure... but i think theres a better word to replace "longing of something"....

    Too simple of a poem for me.. its more like a heart's contents bursting out...

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    Post Re: Can you tell me...

    Cute as Always,

    Awww....You're really good at love poems.
    You always seem to question a person in your poems

    I hope you write more and I'll be looking out for them ^_^.

    -Zainab

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    Re: Can you tell me...

    haha thank you i donno what i was gonna put in that other than that word ray lol

    and thanks for sayin it was cute but its ture thats the thing lol

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