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    Can't Deal With It (cutting, not for the weak hearted)

    The sharpened blade is in my hand
    As tears from my eyes fall
    They're all screaming down below
    No one cares at all.

    Please don't give your love to me,
    I promise you it is a waste
    Of time and love and kindness
    And you will be replaced.

    Not with another person,
    Never fear for that
    But with my loyal blade
    Pools of blood where I sat.

    It'll never be the same
    Please don't try to make it
    Stop telling me to just pretend
    Cause I could never fake it.

    Happiness is just a gift
    That not everyone gets
    And if you knew everything
    You'd be this way too I bet.

    I hate all of the happiness
    I hate this Christmas tree
    I hate the mask of smiles
    Mostly, I hate me.

    I didn't want to hurt you
    Or make you yell and cry
    But this is the only thing
    That really gets me by.

    I can't take this one more day
    Cause I'm dying bit by bit
    I can't take this pain and numbness
    And suicidal shit.

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    Re: Can't Deal With It (cutting, not for the weak hearted)

    hmm. Vivid words would makes this poem beautiful. Very vivid words of description.
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    Re: Can't Deal With It (cutting, not for the weak hearted)

    I like this poem! It shows your emotion, and it kinda reminds me of an old friend of mine. Good job!


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    Re: Can't Deal With It (cutting, not for the weak hearted)

    A little messed up but I guess it was an decent poem.

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    Re: Can't Deal With It (cutting, not for the weak hearted)

    dude i love it! can i steal it and put it on my comp?

    IN THE END IT DOSENT EVEN MATTER

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    Re: Can't Deal With It (cutting, not for the weak hearted)

    you're getting better as I read your poems! Keep up the good work and try to follow the critiques giving to you by the people on here and you will be a great writer! Once again keep up the good work!

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