wow, yes i liked this one too. Full of emotion and uncertainty of yourself. Nice work. Your emotions are clearly stated in your poetry.
I wrote this poem late last night. I don't even really now where I got the inspiration for it. lol Tell me what you think.![]()
Can’t hold on to water
Falling from my fingertips
Flowing into a river
Winding far away
Can’t hear the wind
Over the ringing in my ears
Blowing through the forest
Leaves dancing in the breeze
Can’t smell the flowers
Because of garbage in the dumps
Still growing in the green fields
Trying to catch the sun
Can’t taste the sweetness of fruit
Since there’s too much junk
It’s there hanging on vines and trees
Waiting to be picked
Can’t see the light
It isn’t in my dark eyes
Hidden in the shadows
Where’s the switch to turn it on?
Can’t find myself
Swallowed up in the world
Too many puzzle pieces missing
Scattered all around this earth
wow, yes i liked this one too. Full of emotion and uncertainty of yourself. Nice work. Your emotions are clearly stated in your poetry.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
WOW that was good I really like it.
It has so much feeling and emotion .
Keep it up hope to read more of your poems^.^
i liked this poem you really desribed how the wrold is decaying really well
and alot of thing you said are true about the fruits and the water and the sun shine, its a rel shame that life isnt like it used to be before we started poluttin git with all this junk we created. very cool poem are you ibto preserving the world
or something? it sounds like it.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Thanks for the comments you guys! I'm glad you guys liked it!
Holder: lol I guess I'm sort of in to the whole perserve the world thing.
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