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  1. Nov 09, 2007 07:53 AM #1
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    Can't stop...

    I can't stop crying.
    As you can see, you're so
    god damned important to me.

    I can't stop dying
    on the inside. I truly though
    you would come back to my side.

    I can't stop lying
    to myself. I know that I
    shouldn't, it's bad for my health.

    I can't stop trying
    to make myself stop, but if
    I hold in the tears, I'll probably pop.

    I can't stop crying...

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  2. Nov 09, 2007 08:08 AM #2
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    Re: Can't stop...

    this has a very nice flow... and the emotion can be felt... a nicely done poem ^^ keep it up..
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  3. Nov 09, 2007 08:26 AM #3
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    Re: Can't stop...

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    this has a very nice flow... and the emotion can be felt... a nicely done poem ^^ keep it up..
    Thanks Ray. I'm glad you like my poem. I appreciate your comments, as always. I wanted to make this longer, but I couldn't quite find the right words.

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    Re: Can't stop...

    WOW I felt that one sprout and I could see someone crying over a lost one (sounds crazy but that is the image I saw from your poem. keep it up man.
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    Re: Can't stop...

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    WOW I felt that one sprout and I could see someone crying over a lost one (sounds crazy but that is the image I saw from your poem. keep it up man.
    Yeah, that's kinda what I was goin' for. Thanks for your comment. I appreciate your support.

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    Re: Can't stop...

    your more than welcome and remember if you ever need to vent, pm me and I will talk with you.
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    Re: Can't stop...

    Look at you! Writing poems, another sad one, something seems to be going on, hurting you. I cant put my finger on it, but yeah. any who, You have great speed at putting your poems up i see a new one every day, and i only put one up like once every 3 weeks or so. LOL!well aln who keep up the work!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Can't stop...

    Quote Originally Posted by highteckdudu View Post
    Look at you! Writing poems, another sad one, something seems to be going on, hurting you. I cant put my finger on it, but yeah. any who, You have great speed at putting your poems up i see a new one every day, and i only put one up like once every 3 weeks or so. LOL!well aln who keep up the work!
    I agree something is up (sarcasim) but I cant put my finger on it
    anyways sprout were here if you need anything.
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