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    Can't Stop Thinking About You

    I can't stop thinking about you
    Can't stop, can't stop loving you
    It's been 3 weeks, and you haven't come on
    Why is that?

    Why can't I stop thinking about you?
    I'm going so crazy without you here by my side
    I can't read, I can't breath, why do I feel this way?
    You got me all sedated with this feeling of mine

    When your not around I feel so down
    Why is that?
    I can't stop, can't stop thinking about you.

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    Re: Can't Stop Thinking About You

    This was quick and to the point but it was some disjointed stanzas. They were all blended with this theme which was awesome. I like your poems that were sort of the random sentences blended together but this is nice as well.

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    Re: Can't Stop Thinking About You

    Nicely done. it feels like my heart when i'm not around my girlfriend. She's the best thing in the world, and that looks like what love wrote here on this page. good work on getting to the point in this one. take care now.

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    Re: Can't Stop Thinking About You

    What a beautiful poem. Short, but still very good in my opinion.

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