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    cant tell me nothing

    Keep your sorry insults
    I dont want them
    Keep your fake ass apology
    I don't need it

    You THINK you got into my head
    But you didn't
    You THINKyou had me all messed up in the head
    But you don't

    You can't tell me nothing

    I got my own mind and don't need you to tell me what to say
    Is it the way i walk?
    The way i sway that makes you feel like you can tell me something?
    No honey child, you can't tell me nothing.

    I say what i want
    I feel what i feel
    I live my life
    You'll just have to deal

    You can't tell me nothing

    You insult me
    I laugh
    It hurts just as much as a slap on the hand
    I insult you back
    No one would hear from you again.

    Can't tell me nothing

    You mad because i hurt feelings
    You mad because i say what I feel?
    You mad becuase you got a whiny whimp
    when you had a stand up b*t*h?

    Man, you can't tell me nothing.

    Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen

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    Re: cant tell me nothing

    *Claps.* Fantastic. The anger goes perfectly with the flow. I like your writing more and more every time I read it.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: cant tell me nothing

    Yeah, It looks like you've been improving your poetry. I like it. Keep it up. Don't let anyone keep you down. I don't. *shrug* can't wait to see what gets typed up next. I'm sure it will be awesome. Best of luck to your literary endeavors.

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