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    Canvas and Inkwell

    Whispers from past thoughts linger
    coming and going with the tide.

    The images of your face
    on the reel in my mind.

    I looked into the light in the sky
    and found it was only the sun.

    Oh sweet mother earth
    is this what you've made of me.

    A defender of lies?

    Oh what would be the feeling to dye the
    clouds the colors of paradise. Could that be?

    What am I destined to create,
    if anything maybe the night?

    The paints of life were growing dull and discolored,
    then your hand guided its way over the
    canvas, splashing it with neon.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Canvas and Inkwell

    the canvas of life has many stencils
    and brushes that can be used to make
    your canvas seem more vivid and alive
    and for this reason everything imagined
    can be put there and even shared with
    somone you love.

    this poem is really great and to have
    a great mind to describe life and emotions
    in a way that lets the reader become a painter
    of there on life is really great my self i have
    added more soft colours on a really fragile
    and exspensive canvas of life.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Canvas and Inkwell

    Once again, the exact feeling I was going for.

    Not many people understand my poetry, welcome to my world.
    Dear Dinah...

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