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    Re: Carcass

    well thats good. but it would be alot easier writing poetry when your happy. This is my favorite poem...

    Music can tell a story

    I hear the music
    Music is love
    Music is life
    Music can tell a story

    Music cheers
    But also brings memories
    What's so special about music?
    When I listen to music it takes me'
    to another world.

    Music is my passion
    Music soothes the soul
    Music can take away the pain
    Our life is music.

    Music inspires me
    The music flows through me
    Do you hear it?
    The beats of music.

    Come dance with me tonight.

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    Re: Carcass

    Oh.. thats a lovely poem there.. :3 suits your character somehow ^^ I can imagine a little girl prancing around happily expressing her love for music...

    I write poems best when I am unhappy and depressed... and when I have a critical thought, when I am happy.. I just am unable to put it into words sometimes... :3

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    Re: Carcass

    well for starters......try writing down adjectives, or items, or foods that make you happy. places, people all sorts of stuff. than before you know it....you have poem. =]
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    Re: Carcass

    xD thats so simple... :3 bleehh.. no wanna.. i don't do happy poems.. because i am not happy at the moment :3 I want my poems to speak the truth ^^

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    Re: Carcass

    sometimes the purity of simplicity is often forgotten by others. I'd keep it this simple. since most my poems reflect my emotion and mood
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    Re: Carcass

    simplicity is good.. but it raises questions sometimes... :3 I like detailed stuffs too.. but I can't stop describing something once i start

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