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    The Caretaker

    The Earth has revealed herself and
    To us through her own accord. We live
    Live here only if
    We abide by her laws.
    If we abuse her laws
    She takes a hefty revenge.
    If her laws are disobeyed,
    She has the
    Power to
    Save us
    From our ultimate
    DOOM.
    She can send us down by
    A riveting earthquake could
    Destroy our cites and whole
    Islands
    To punish us humans for
    Our misdeeds.
    To the place that
    WE call our home,
    That also could destroy us.
    A word to live
    By this planet is our
    ONLY
    Home and we don’t
    Need to ABUSE
    Our wonderful and
    Beautiful Caretaker.
    So we need
    TO take care of our
    One and ONLY
    Mother planet.
    BY:
    Christopher Marshall
    Rikku's Lover

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    Re: The Caretaker

    Quote Originally Posted by rikku07 View Post
    If her laws are disobeyed,
    She has the
    Power to
    Save us
    From our ultimate
    DOOM.
    This was my favorite part. This poem shows an understanding of the world around us. I sure hope its not to late for people to make changes and slow down the process of "doom".
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Caretaker

    wow... I dont really like poetry but i REALLY like this one. It really helps us remember that we should take care of our home if we want to keep living on it! We shouldnt abuse it and take advantage of it, it gives us what we need to servive. And what do we give in return? Nothing but abuse.
    Good Job Chris~!
    Sometimes you put walls up not to keep people out, but to see who cares enough to break them down.

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