The Caretaker

rikku07 · Sep 08, 2007, 03:25 PM

The Caretaker

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The Earth has revealed herself and
To us through her own accord. We live
Live here only if
We abide by her laws.
If we abuse her laws
She takes a hefty revenge.
If her laws are disobeyed,
She has the
Power to
Save us
From our ultimate
DOOM.
She can send us down by
A riveting earthquake could
Destroy our cites and whole
Islands
To punish us humans for
Our misdeeds.
To the place that
WE call our home,
That also could destroy us.
A word to live
By this planet is our
ONLY
Home and we don’t
Need to ABUSE
Our wonderful and
Beautiful Caretaker.
So we need
TO take care of our
One and ONLY
Mother planet.
BY:
Christopher Marshall
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Rikku's Lover

iluvmyloser · Sep 08, 2007, 03:32 PM

wow i like this poem
it really shows alot of emotions and alot of great description good job...keep it ↑
♥~*The Princess*~♥

!Jamie5192 · Sep 08, 2007, 06:07 PM

You did a wonderful job here Rikku.. You have great wording and fantastic details.... It's really good and I like it. Keep up the great work^_^

ILikeApples5520 · Sep 11, 2007, 06:55 PM

Not trying to pseudo mod or anything, but this wouldn't qualify for this month.

You should read the September POTM Guidelines.

Sep 08, 2007, 03:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
rikku07 Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 26 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 90	The Caretaker The Caretaker -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Earth has revealed herself and To us through her own accord. We live Live here only if We abide by her laws. If we abuse her laws She takes a hefty revenge. If her laws are disobeyed, She has the Power to Save us From our ultimate DOOM. She can send us down by A riveting earthquake could Destroy our cites and whole Islands To punish us humans for Our misdeeds. To the place that WE call our home, That also could destroy us. A word to live By this planet is our ONLY Home and we don’t Need to ABUSE Our wonderful and Beautiful Caretaker. So we need TO take care of our One and ONLY Mother planet. BY: Christopher Marshall __________________ Rikku's Lover __________________ Rikku's Lover
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Sep 08, 2007, 03:32 PM	#2 (permalink)
iluvmyloser Àddïctëd tø \|ăüghïñg :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ♥>>WHERE y0U WANNA bE??<<♥ Posts: 653 Thanks: 26 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 10,557	Re: The Caretaker wow i like this poem it really shows alot of emotions and alot of great description good job...keep it ↑ ♥~The Princess~♥ __________________ ♥~Thanks Eve for this on my Bday!Bow down to your royal highness~♥ Join Animal Wonders.. <-- Click it!!!^^
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Sep 08, 2007, 06:07 PM	#3 (permalink)
!Jamie5192 Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 377 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -184	Re: The Caretaker You did a wonderful job here Rikku.. You have great wording and fantastic details.... It's really good and I like it. Keep up the great work^_^
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Sep 11, 2007, 06:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
ILikeApples5520 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Bergen County, NJ Posts: 297 Thanks: 8 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 6,168	Re: The Caretaker Not trying to pseudo mod or anything, but this wouldn't qualify for this month. You should read the September POTM Guidelines. __________________ Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!
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