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    The Caretaker

    The Caretaker

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    The Earth has revealed herself and
    To us through her own accord. We live
    Live here only if
    We abide by her laws.
    If we abuse her laws
    She takes a hefty revenge.
    If her laws are disobeyed,
    She has the
    Power to
    Save us
    From our ultimate
    DOOM.
    She can send us down by
    A riveting earthquake could
    Destroy our cites and whole
    Islands
    To punish us humans for
    Our misdeeds.
    To the place that
    WE call our home,
    That also could destroy us.
    A word to live
    By this planet is our
    ONLY
    Home and we don’t
    Need to ABUSE
    Our wonderful and
    Beautiful Caretaker.
    So we need
    TO take care of our
    One and ONLY
    Mother planet.
    BY:
    Christopher Marshall
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    Re: The Caretaker

    wow i like this poem
    it really shows alot of emotions and alot of great description good job...keep it ↑
    ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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    Re: The Caretaker

    You did a wonderful job here Rikku.. You have great wording and fantastic details.... It's really good and I like it. Keep up the great work^_^

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    Re: The Caretaker

    Not trying to pseudo mod or anything, but this wouldn't qualify for this month.

    You should read the September POTM Guidelines.


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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